Evolution of Snow Queen’s Cover Art
I get asked about cover art fairly often. How is it designed, how much input does the author get, etc. I spoke to Scott Fischer, the artist for books one, two, and four in the princess series, and he generously agreed to let me share his sketches and the finished art.
The process started late last year, after my editor Sheila read the manuscript. During our chat about revisions, she took a few minutes to discuss possible cover ideas.
I should note that this doesn’t always happen. I had no input into my first few covers, and not all editors want authorial input. My contract gives me zero control over cover issues, which is the norm. (See here for a very different, very painful publishing tale which includes cover problems.)
In early November, I e-mailed Sheila some notes about the characters and setting: not a set of instructions, but brief descriptions to help the artist. For example:
Talia: Talia hates the cold. She’s wearing a heavy jacket, but keeps her hands bare for fighting. She’s darker skinned, with black hair she keeps pulled or tied back. At one point near the end, she carries a [REDACTED]. She’ll be in boots, and possibly a scarf as well if that doesn’t obscure her too much. Being Talia, she also carries half an armory on her person.
Scott mentioned that these have been helpful. In his words, they’re “detail specific, but not too controlling.”
On Monday, January 4, Sheila sent me the first sketch. Have you noticed a pattern here? There’s no direct author-artist communication; everything goes through the editor, and I suspect that’s for the best. I might be the brilliantest writer on the planet, but that doesn’t mean I know squat about art or about what makes a successful cover.
Here’s sketch number one. Click for a larger view.
Sheila didn’t like the stars, and wasn’t happy with the poses for Danielle and Talia. I pretty much agreed with her, though I liked the overall layout, and thought this had the potential to be the best cover in the series. I also suggested that the castle wasn’t quite right for the book, but this was a minor nitpick.
Snow’s sword isn’t precisely accurate to the book either, but you know what? I like it. I think it’s more important to have a good, attractive cover than it is for that cover to be 100% accurate. (I’d fight over major errors, or the whitewashing of a cover, but not something like this.)
Sheila e-mailed Scott, and a day later we received the second sketch. (Scott is fast!) The stars were gone, and I liked Talia’s pose a lot better in this one. I’m also really liking that the characters don’t feel posed the way they have in previous covers. This is an image that tells a story, and I love that!
That palace was still nagging at me. Sheila said she thought it had too much of an SF feel. But we were close! I’m a little curious where the cover text will fit, but I figure that’s DAW’s problem to figure out. At this point, I really couldn’t wait to see the finished version.
Fortunately, I didn’t have to wait long. Scott turned in the finished art on Monday the 10th. I’m still talking to my editor, and there may be some minor tweaks, but this is pretty much final:
What do you think? I’d love it if other authors could weigh in on the cover art process.
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My thanks to Scott, both for producing yet another awesome cover, and for permission to share his work. Check out his web site or his Facebook page. He’s also got a children’s book out called Jump [Amazon | B&N | Mysterious Galaxy], which — in addition to being available at the usual outlets, was packaged with boxes of Cheerio’s. And he’s a musician. This is a man who’s clearly exceeded his quota of coolness.
Dwagginz
January 11, 2011 @ 11:10 am
I like the bottom one (Which I think you said was the final one), but Talia looks a little light-skinned and Snow (That is Snow in the background, right?) looks different to her previous versions. As in very different. Older and more defined would be a good approximation of how she’s different, I think.
Wasn’t aware that RHR’s cover was by someone else, though. It’d explain why it was more ‘pastel’ than the previous covers, though.
I do like Scott’s art, though. It’s very refreshing 🙂
Jim C. Hines
January 11, 2011 @ 11:14 am
Yep, the bottom one is the final version. And yes, that’s Snow in the background. I think all three look slightly different, but Snow the most. Which is actually pretty appropriate for the book.
“Wasn’t aware that RHR’s cover was by someone else, though.”
Which, in my opinion, means Mel Grant did a great job with it 🙂
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John Wenger
January 11, 2011 @ 3:29 pm
What a treat to see the evolution of this cover! As much as I liked The Mermaid’s Madness cover, I think this will be my favorite. (I liked Snow in the earlier sketches, though – a little less “romancey.”)
Kat
January 11, 2011 @ 4:29 pm
This is fabulous – my favorite cover so far. And I’m very excited to read the book.
Anita Fricks
January 11, 2011 @ 5:40 pm
I like the third picture. The *swirl* in the background appears to be windblown hair. This could be an action, or windy, effect. The princesses appear to be more or less in clear focus with a brilliant use of color with other background effects blurred. You’re right about the stars; they were too attention grabbing. Cover art is important because it is the first thing to grab a reader’s attention. It looks like you have a good cover!
Jim C. Hines
January 11, 2011 @ 7:25 pm
Thanks, John! Snow is going to get a slight tweak. Don’t know if her expression will change or not, but she’ll look at least a little bit different on the book.
Jim C. Hines
January 11, 2011 @ 7:25 pm
Thanks, Kat! I’m waiting for the “official” final cover, but I think this may beat out Mermaid as my favorite 🙂
Jim C. Hines
January 11, 2011 @ 7:26 pm
Thanks, Anita! My take on the swirls was that they were supposed to evoke the northern lights, but that’s totally my interpretation.
Max
January 11, 2011 @ 9:30 pm
Mermaid’s Madness still holds the “favorite” spot for me, in terms of cover art. There was just.. character to it all, character that was very true to the book. Not only in expression and posture but also in clothing style. It was the cover alone (and hint of mermaids therein) that prompted me to pick it up, speed-read the first chapter, and then buy it. I don’t know if there was greater communication between author and artist for it, or if you tweaked the text after the art. Either way, it was as if the artist -was- the author, which is very reassuring in storytelling.
But Snow Queen’s Shadow might become the favorite after it’s finished. We’ll see.
As to Red Hood’s Revenge, they felt.. unnatural. A practice shot, with stand-ins for Talia and Danielle, told to smile for the camera while they check the light levels –and then Red Hood in the back, photobombing the shot. I know that sounds harsh, but there’s just a very natural feel to all three girls in the first two books.
And I -still- don’t know for certain which girl is which in the German cover for Red Hood’s Revenge.
Dwagginz
January 12, 2011 @ 5:51 am
From left-to-right on the German RHR cover, I think it’s Talia, Snow, Danielle and Red. Talia looks very… Uh… Naked, at least by her standards.
Dwagginz
January 12, 2011 @ 5:52 am
Ah, so I’m guessing we’ll find out why Snow looks so different?
Still think Talia could do with being darkened a little but it’s slowly growing on me! 😀
Jim C. Hines
January 12, 2011 @ 7:29 am
Yep! And re: Talia, it sounds like she will be. Scott e-mailed me yesterday about it.
Jim C. Hines
January 12, 2011 @ 8:23 am
With Red Hood, I can’t speak for the artist, but I think part of what happened is that since we had a different artist doing the cover, the priority was to make sure it was recognizably a princess book, with a little less emphasis on doing something new or different. In a perfect world, I would have preferred to have Scott do that one too, but the schedule didn’t work out. And I think Mel did a nice job of hitting that primary goal and making it clear this was the next book in the series, if that makes sense?
With the German cover, I assume Danielle and Red are the two on the right. Snow and Talia … your guess is as good as mine.
Dwagginz
January 12, 2011 @ 9:32 am
Awesome! Can’t wait 🙂
Moving my pre-order from Amazon to The Book Depository next week, so that’ll be cool too!
Dwagginz
January 12, 2011 @ 9:35 am
The middle of the three Princesses, if you look closely, has a choker on. Her hair is also closer to Snow’s colour, so I’d wager that’s Snow, leaving the left-most Princess to be a very confused Talia. Maybe she felt like experimenting that day? :p
KatG
January 13, 2011 @ 3:32 pm
I kind of like it more when they’re all standing three together, but this is certainly the most striking and beautiful of the four, and it sort of builds off of what was done in the other three covers. I think this is a great cover for the end of the series.
DaveC
January 23, 2011 @ 5:44 pm
The prominent face on the final cover looks like Cher. The first thing I thought when I saw her face was “Cher from the 80’s” … …. Oops
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